Delivering The Goods
April 26th, 2009

Delivering The Goods

INT. PUB -- NIGHT

Lirielle walks in with the papers. Finnegan spots her and waves her over.

FINNEGAN

Well?

Lirielle spreads the papers out on the table.

LIRIELLE

It was a trap. He knew I was coming.

FINNEGAN

Did he now? And yet, here you are. You weren’t stupid enough to be followed, were you?

LIRIELLE

Hmph. Please.

FINNEGAN

Right then. You can go.

LIRIELLE

All my sins forgiven?

FINNEGAN

Until next time. Watch yourself. Follow the rules.

Lirielle turns to leave. Crabbe blocks her way.

LIRIELLE

Let me by, Crabbe. You heard the man. I’m a free girl.

Crabbe reaches out and plays with a lock of her hair.

CRABBE

For now. I’ve got my eye on you. Another slip up, and Finnegan will let me have you. Don’t matter how good a pickpocket you are.

Lirielle swats his hand away and shoulders him aside. He laughs. Lirielle stomps to the door, thinks a moment. She looks at Finnegan in warning.

LIRIELLE

By the by, Finnegan. There’s something odd about those papers--

FINNEGAN

Why else would I want them? Now get you gone.

Postscript:
I haven’t been painting much in the past few weeks, so I’m feeling a little rusty. Also tried a new technique. Paint grayscale first to get good values, then add colors. So the poses feel stiff and my color seems less integrated. Ah, well.

I’m thinking about ending this first little chapter. Lirielle isn’t in trouble anymore, so the initial bit of business has been resolved. I’ve set up the world and a bunch of characters. And now there are a couple of mysteries to explore: who is this Cromwell and what’s up with those papers anyway? Lirielle may think she’s done with them, since she’s put them behind her. But just because she’s unaware of events doesn’t mean they won’t impact her later.

I’m afraid there won’t be much structure to her story. I’m finding that treating these like informal blog posts are easiest for me to both be productive and not feel like it’s too much work. I realize that this may not be the best thing for a cohesive, well-paced story. :-( But it’s good for my creative outlet, and really that’s the main goal.


June update

Getting in some painting practice after being inspired by the season 2 finale of Dr. Who. I’m considering adding a character to Lirielle’s story that will owe his heritage to the Tenth Doctor.

Currently I am also working on a feature script with the intent to get it up on reels by this time next year.

Unfortunately this means Lirielle is becoming a backburner project. I do find that I enjoy dabbling with Lirielle’s story whenever I get stuck on the feature scriptwriting.


Progress for March

Things are going slowly right now. Been very busy with other things that don’t leave enough mental energy to write. Plus I keep getting sidetracked. Like today I upgraded my ComicPress version, but then I spent a couple of hours repairing stylesheets and whatnot.

I’m not sure I’m happy with the emphasis I placed on magic in the last couple of installments. I might try to limit what magic can do soon so it’s not such a can of worms.

I’ve been writing one page at a time and living from installment to installment. I think I need to spend a little bit planning things out a little bit better, which means my already slow one-page-a-month pace is about to get slower. I’m going to try to make it up by posting some more concept art while I get my story in better shape.


more delays

Sigh. I really do mean to publish the next page, honest.

My brother’s indie film premiere’s next month, so all my free time is going to fixing shots and working on the poster. My day job has really picked up too, rolling into production this month.

On top of it all, I got sick. My 18-month-old daughter managed to get pink eye, an ear infection, and a nasty cough. Of course me and my wife caught it too. Spent the last couple days sleeping a lot and taking cold medicine. I seem to be on the mend and will soldier in to work tomorrow.

While home from work these past couple days, I did seriously think about trying to finish page 4. But it’s really hard to work when you’re miserable and practically asleep and really the highlight of the day is managing to microwave your lunch.


distractions

After a marathon month of working on page 3, work has kind of ground to a halt. The bulk of my time now focuses on redesigning my brother’s website in preparation for the premiere of his indie feature. And even there, the tech work is dwarfing the creative. Trying to wrangle CSS and javascript so that it works across Firefox, Safari, and IE really hurts.

I’m attending Siggraph this week and yesterday picked up a couple of art books from Ballistic. Digital Painting 2 and Concept Art. Very informative and inspirational.

I did put in a couple hours last night on the beginnings of page 4, and I think have finally cracked the staging problem I’d been wrestling with trying to show how Lirielle drops from one walkway to another.

Right now my brother’s website is taking priority. So the page 4 update is probably 3 or 4 weeks away. That’s a long time between installments! The story is crawling along. I’m tempted to just write prose or screenplay format and post it along with one illustration on a weekly or bi-weekly basis, just to try and get things on a more regular schedule. We’ll see. I’m really enjoying the comic art creation. Maybe I’ll just have to get looser and not spend so much time per panel.


lirielle street urchin sketch

Lirielle street urchin sketchDesigning the costume for Lirielle in her street urchin phase. Her pose is stiff and she could look scruffier. But mostly I’m working on the design for her wool coat and skirt combo. I’m still debating whether or not to give her a hat or a cap of some sort. She’s not wearing a hat in the opening page, so I’m going to skip it for now.

This drawing ended up with a half-painted half-line art look. It’s not what I originally intended. I thought I’d try to go all painted or with a more traditional comic book coloring approach. But this is kind of in-between and has an interesting feel to it. We’ll see if my other concept work turns out like this.